User:TaylorRclantonPrice/Brackish marsh/Mattdwill97 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taylor Price


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Complete your peer review exercise below, providing as much constructive criticism as possible. The more detailed suggestions you provide, the more useful it will be to your classmate. Make sure you consider each of the following aspects:

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? The writer made improved the content of the article. More than likely they will update the lead to include the changes that they have made.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes the lead involves information about the changes added; the new algae added to the biodiversity section.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? In the first paragraph of the lead of the "original article" you can put in some information about the biodiversity present.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? All the information provided in the lead is presented further down.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? The lead is concise and not overly detailed.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * The content added is relevant to the topic. You provided a wide array of organisms that inhabit brackish marshes.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * The information added is balances and not biased.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * The sources/references are good. There is also an accurate use of sources.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * The organization of the article is good. Probably try putting the animals (in the brackish marsh) in a different paragraph than the different types of algae.

Images and Media
No images/media added.



Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * You made great and well need changes to the articles. You provided a wide array of organisms that live in brackish marshes. The only suggestion is you probably could try grouping some of those organisms more because listing all of them in the body can get exhausting.
 * The article is way more complete with your changes. Great job!