User:Taylorbr97/Diffusible signal factor/Iroy00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taylorbr97


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Taylorbr97/Diffusible_signal_factor?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The rough draft you guys have is great for the first draft. The introduction gives a great overview of what the topic is and provides details that you discussed in the function section. I would like to see it be a bit longer and discuss more sections which I assume you are planning to add.

The function section is amazing in my view it has great citations which lead to great citations that allow the reader to research more about this topic. I am assuming that as the semester moves forward you will be adding more sections which I look forward to reading because if they are like the function section they will be great. One thing I would like to see is maybe a few illustrations or pictures of mechanisms or things like this to provide a visual aspect to make things clearer to the reader. I would love to see a synthesis section added like you talk about the introduction.

The article overall is a very good start, it is very neutral and as a variety of reliable sources that inform you in a way which is consistent with an encyclopedia.