User:Taylorbr97/Diffusible signal factor/Kemrishae Peer Review

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Your information is basically like spot on. It’s super well done. The first paragraph though, I am still a little confused with what diffusible signal factor is, like I now know what its used for but like is it a chemical? A hormone? A metabolistic product? Like I am just a little confused and would add that into that first sentence if possible.

I really liked your function paragraphs and really liked how many places you included where its found.

I think the only thing you could possibly do (because I know its super hard to find information on these topics literally anywhere on the internet) is try finding more information about what exactly it is and more about what it does to add.

Your references look really great and credible!