User:Taylorbr97/Diffusible signal factor/Lumbarjax Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taylorbr97


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 * Diffusible signal factor

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Lead:

This is super clear and concise. I love it. Very straight forward. I would maybe revisit wording on the 3rd sentence and change, "can be seen" to "is done by the.." Other than that, this is great.

Content:

I would add a little more about the structure of DSFs. The first sentence of the last paragraph gives the impression that is what this paragraph is about, but then we read about its regulatory role. Adding a paragraph about structure could round out the article a bit more, and might be of interest of someone looking up a summary of DSF.

Tone and Balance:

Great tone! Nice and neutral.

Sources and References:

Awesome! These look great! You have a lot, and that is perfect.

Organization:

I would rewrite the 2nd sentence of the first paragraph under function. Maybe put, "...capable of forming a polymicrobial community, known as biofilm, in which..." instead of writing "this is known as biofilm" at the end of the sentence.