User:Taylorg26/Jugular Vein/Glackinm1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taylorg26


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Taylorg26/Jugular Vein


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jugular vein

Evaluate the drafted changes
Matthew Glackin Peer Review

Lead

- The lead reflects the updated content that was added.

- The lead had a good introductory sentence that is concise and gives a good description of what the article topic will be.

- The lead gives a brief description of two of the major sections but does not include a description of the idiomatic expression.

- The lead contains only information present in the article.

- The lead is concise and straight to the points.

Content

- All of the content is relevant and up to date.

- There is no content that I can think of that is missing.

- This article does not deal with an equity gap and underrepresented populations as it is a vein that everyone has.

Tone and Balance

- The article holds a neutral tone and is unbiased.

- No points are overrepresented, everything is firmly talked about.

Sources and References

- All of the sources seem strong and reliable.

- The content is sited well and accurately represents what is presented in the article.

- The sources are thorough and up to date.

- You will need to add more sources to back up more information.

Organization

- I like the order of the article.

- The content is well written and easy to read.

- I did not notice and grammar and spelling mistakes.

- The subsections are necessary and well placed.

Images and Media

- You will need to add some images to help represent your information.

- They will also have to not be copyrighted and will have to be displayed in an appealing way.

Overall

- I feel like you have made a strong article that will increase the overall quality. Some strengths is how concise and straight to the point the information is. The article also holds a lot of quick links which are good.

- Something that can be improved on is the amount of sources and information backed up by the sources. Along with that, you will need to add some pictures.

- Overall it is a good article and I hope you get a good grade