User:Taylormapstone/Mairin Johnston/Danifuchs Peer Review

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In this particular article I would not say there is exactly a lead, however I believe the rest of the information provided aboutt Mairin Johnsto makes up for it. With that being said, the content of the draft is extremely relevant to the topic. Looking at some of the links included on this draft so far I would say that the information is up to date. I believe all the information included is appropriate for the topic. I am sure this is not all of the information about Mairin Johnston, however because her career took place in 20th century Ireland there may not be as much documented about her. The content that is added is extremely neutral and there does not seem to be any biases presented by the writers. The sources seem to be reliable secondary pieces of information, and collectively the content of the article is accurately represented within the sources. The sources do not appear to be very current, but overall they provide relevant information to the topic. Some do not give as much information as others, however, because Johnston's career took place so long ago, and not much was documented about her, this is not very surprising. The links to the sources work as well. I would consider the content to be very well written and does not seem to have any grammatical or spelling errors. No images are included, however I would not be surprised if there are limited images of Johnston if there is also limited information on her. Overall I think this is a very well organized and constructed article that provides useful information on Johnston.