User:Taylorpace13/Mental health inequality/Cbrads2 Peer Review

General info
Taylorpace13
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Taylorpace13/Mental health inequality:Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Mental health inequality

Evaluate the drafted changes
Firstly - your sandbox page is incredibly well organized. It was easy to follow along in order of the sections you edited and see where you added sentences, sources, and paragraphs. You contributed great information on the aspect of homelessness in the socioeconomic disparities section - backed up by reliable sources and your language was unbiased and clear. The information you added under the general section titled "Disparities in accessing and quality in mental health care" brought the section together nicely and bolstered it with sources. Great job!