User:Taylorstevens12/Preferred gender pronoun/Ejpark0111 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Taylorstevens12


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 * User:Taylorstevens12/Preferred gender pronoun
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Preferred gender pronoun

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I am not seeing anything in your sandbox as of now but I'll keep checking in. I think this a great topic. I am not very educated in this topic so my suggestion might be bad but I was thinking that you can maybe potentially add in a short background section.