User:Tcspencer01/Johanna Toruño/Sleepythedwarf Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tcspencer01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tcspencer01/Johanna_Toru%C3%B1o?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Add imagines when and if possible. I changed some of the order of the author's words to make it more clear and so it would flow better.