User:Td1935/Kim Eunho/Chitimes2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing User:Td1935 Kim Eunho's article


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Td1935/Kim_Eunho/Bibliography?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Does not exist

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead - the lead is in the developing phases, but it covers most of the basic information, which is good. Could use more basic/overall information to really get a grasp as to who Kim Eunho was. Maybe his pen name could go in this section

Early life - the general information is there. More information or details would be nice, but if that's not available, to make that early life section longer, perhaps it could tie into or be paired with his education, since that also occurred during his early life.

Education - needs more information and elaboration. Could add the years attended each institution, talk more about what he took away from it, etc

Political views - needs more information and elaboration

Career - needs more information and elaboration

Paintings - needs more information and elaboration, could discuss artistic elements of the painting, social / political / historical aspects that may be relevant to the painting, meaning or idea behind the paintings, etc

I think an explanation of his art style would be great, only if materials support that