User:Td1935/Kim Eunho/J43won 77 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Td1935


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Td1935/Kim Eunho
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * x

Evaluate the drafted changes
The original article does not exist, which means that the editor had to start from the beginning. With that in mind, the outline is great. It contains the essential parts (Early Life, Education, Political Views, Career, Relationships, Awards, and Works).

Suggestions would be adding Death and filling up the passages. Also, the lead passage will eventually be filled when information for the other passages is added.

Sources are newly written and credible since most of them are research articles.

Nice Job. Thenuri :)