User:Tdalgai/Verner Panton/Bherrin3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tdalgai, Erinbascom, Rafaelegb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tdalgai/Verner Panton


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Verner Panton

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, you did an amazing job of adding information to this article. I appreciate that you added more to his personal life outside of design. The edits are well organized and flow well. I like that you highlighted specific works as well. One suggestion might be to continue to add to/diversify you biography. I also think that adding photos would help to break up all of the information, as well as visualize the specific works that you discuss in the article. But really great work! ~