User:Tdaprano/Tetraplegia/Sudokologist Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tdaprano


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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

The lead included an introductory sentence and has been updated to reflect the new content. The lead included a content table descript the article's major sections. The lead is concise and does not include information that is not present in the article. The overall content is relevant to the topic and up to date. The addition of tables and graphics is great because it allows the audience to visualize directly and understand the topic better. The article's overall tone is neutral, and there is no bias toward a particular position. All the new content is cited from reliable secondary sources of information and accurately reflects what the source says. The source is current, with the majority of them being published within the past five years and the link embedded in the citation works. The organization of the article is concise and relatively easy to follow. Images were added to enhance the topic and help the reader visualize the description better. All images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations, and thorough descriptions were included in the caption. The anatomy and function section accurately described the consequence of injury at each level and how they are evaluated. Per WikiProject Medicine page's recommendation, reducing medical jargon should make the article more suitable for the general public. Some examples are "osteoporosis," "Autonomic dysreflexia" etc. Overall, it is a very comprehensive description and accurate definition of the condition of tetraplegia. Simplified terminology and detailed descriptions of the condition is well organized into their appropriate sections. Completed all sections of the to-do list in the talk tab. Outstanding work! - Sudokologist