User:Tdinello/Ubiquitous Presidency/Ecpat838 Peer Review

Avoid language that is too casual throughout the whole article, and especially in lead paragraph. Capitalize names of social media platforms. I'm sure your group will be writing more, but make sure to explain each pillar of the paradigm (accessability, personalization, etc). I would include an explanation of previous paradigms in the 'history' section. Hyperlink the existing Wikipedia page on Rhetorical Presidency when you do this. Instead of 'the Ubiquitous Presidency in Action,' I would call that section something like 'Examples of the Ubiquitous Presidency.'

Thank you so much for your peer review. You gave us a lot of really good suggestions that are going to help us out in the end. I was the one who created the section you suggested a subtitle change for, and I appreciated your suggestion. I went and changed that to what you said because I thought that was a good point, so thanks again for that!

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Thanks for the advice, we'll definitely develop our article to talk more about the different niches in the ubiquitous presidency.