User:Tdinello/Ubiquitous Presidency/Polstamin Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tdinello


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tdinello/Ubiquitous Presidency


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked what is written so far and I liked the sources that you used. It was also easy to read. The tone is neutral overall and I liked how you added the example of Bill Clinton and the content itself is good. I also do like how you added hyperlinks.

I think the section on the ubiquitous presidency could work as a Lead because it summarizes what the ubiquitous presidency is and if someone were to read just that first section, they would understand what the overall article is about. I think media could be its own section since there is a decent amount of content to talk about the media and how it intertwines with the ubiquitous presidency. I also think that many of the recent presidents are good examples of ubiquitous presidency in action, so adding more examples from other presidents would make be good.

Peer Review Response
Thank you for the feedback. We've implemented all of the changes you've mentioned, specifically making media its own section, which improves the article a lot. We've also added more examples of presidents per your review, which helps give more context as well as a timeline of the ubiquitous presidency.

Thank you, I really liked your point about recent presidents and how they fit into the page. We will try to implement a guild for identify future presidents under the ubiquitous.

Thank you, media and ubiquity are hand in hand so the media section is paramount in our article for sure!