User:Tds018/Giant guitarfish/Bt021 Peer Review

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Tds018


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 * Giant guitarfish
 * Giant guitarfish

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The lead provides good background info about the individual. However, maybe consider switching the "it is restricted to.." sentence to the taxonomy and range section as it relates with the range of the species. The taxonomy and range section does not include much range info -- consider adding some and bringing that sentence from the lead. The description section is short, but contains good info. Consider adding more ways the species can be distinguished within its range (like the last sentence in the section). The breeding heading is very underdeveloped and should contain more info about the males. In the habitat, you could also include what zone of the ocean that they are found in. This article is missing a conservation section. The reference section does not include a diverse range of articles. I like how there are a lot of wikilinks on the website already, so maybe continue with this theme? There is one picture, which only shows the ventral view. Try getting a picture of the entire fish. You can also add more pictures throughout the article.