User:Tds10/Desmacella hyalina/Jwbeyer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tds10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tds10/Desmacella_hyalina?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The articles that you provided in your bibliography seem like you are going in the right direction. Some of the suggestions I would make would be to include more sources. For the bibliography, I found it a lot easier to write my article when I wrote a lot about each source I found, so if you were looking for ways to add content to your article, that is what I would suggest.

Also, take my opinion with your own discretion; just because this method worked for me, you might have a different way of going about this. Good luck with the rest of your article.