User:Tds10/Wikipedia Assignment/Ninas101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tds10


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tds10/Wikipedia_Assignment?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great start to your article! You have included a good number of sources and the content of your article looks well researched. The tone of your paper is neutral and the content is well organized. There are a few spelling and grammatical errors present in your article so those should be fixed. You may also want to include a taxonomy box instead of the bulleted list in your article. You sources look great but don't forget that they need to be referenced within article as well. I would suggest rereading your article and adding a citation with the corresponding source(s). An image or two may also be a good addition. But other than those few things, the article looks great!