User:TeachTESOL/English-language learner/Faith.barnhill Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TeachTESOL


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TeachTESOL/English-language_learner?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * English-language learner

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

I don't think the lead was edited for this article by the user - I think this user focused on the methods section.

Content/Organization

The content it good and well organized. Though in reading the original article it is hard to tell what changes the user has made in the sandbox edits. Perhaps writing those in bold or labeling the sections as "original" might help.

Tone and Balance

Some criticism of the methods discussed would offer some balance. But other than that the tone is appropriate.

Sources and References

Sources/Bibliography look great. Diverse, well-balanced, and scholarly sources are listed.

Sources and Media

I do not see where the user has added images or other media from looking at the sandbox edits or original article