User:TeachingBox/Translanguaging/Gpanetti Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

TeachingBox


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:TeachingBox/Translanguaging
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Translanguaging

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you've added some valuable information so far. I only noticed one spelling mistake in the second paragraph for "translanguaging". Also, there weren't any links to click in your bibliography nor the draft itself. Adding those would be useful for those to quickly access the sources you've mentioned.

I like how you gave specific examples of translagnuaging when it comes to Spanish. As for what you could add or change, maybe including more information about how this could be incorporated in the U.S.? Or how it is already incorporated and the results of its implementation in another country?

As for neutrality, I think you managed to remain neutral and gave concise and appropriate information for your topic. I didn't see anything added that seemed to be unnecessary or too wordy. Overall, it's done well and I look forward to seeing your final contributions.