User:Tedamala012/African-American dance/Applegirl1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tedamala012


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tedamala012/African-American dance


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American dance

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The tone is very neutral and there is not sign of original research or bias. The sources that are linked work and cite the information mentioned in the draft. The content is easy to read. They could explain more on what goes on in the competitive dances mentioned instead of listing it. For example, they could give more details to the other dances like what they did with Cakewalks.