User:Tedamala012/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: African American Dance
 * African American Dance


 * Article Evaluation
 * The history section needs a lot of work and it needs additional citations. The information in the Performance section was a little too brief as well as the African American sacred section, so more can be added.
 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt4cgq6k.17?searchText=%22African-American+dance%22&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D%2522African-American%2Bdance%2522%26acc%3Don%26wc%3Don&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_phrase_search%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A1ac05a88edadc6d108306c2d34236515&seq=3
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt4cgq6k.17?searchText=%22African-American+dance%22&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3D%2522African-American%2Bdance%2522%26acc%3Don%26wc%3Don&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_phrase_search%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A1ac05a88edadc6d108306c2d34236515&seq=3

Option 2

 * Article title: Vogue
 * Vogue


 * Article Evaluation
 * The structure of this article is good but in the further influence subsection there can be more information for more current times. The content is relevant and most of the claims have citations.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/10.2979/transition.109.85?searchText=Vogue+dance&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DVogue%2Bdance&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A75b622860a7b738f2cee1338bc39ed44
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/465166?searchText=Vogue+dance&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DVogue%2Bdance&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A7ae5b1ac0b3fe8877e47763c9175c5a2

Option 3

 * Article title: Modern Dance
 * Modern Dance


 * Article Evaluation
 * it's pretty good so far and the content is relevant, but in the legacy of modern dance section I think a little more can be added to the introduction. The citations however are reliable, but there are some grammatical issues throughout


 * Sources

Option 4

 * Article title: Afrofuturism
 * Afrofuturism


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is a lot of citations which is'nt a bad thing however the phrasing s a little off since people are compiling different information together. There are also fragments in Mid to late 20th century subsection.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/25433795?searchText=Afrofuturism&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DAfrofuturism&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3Af9232f50aa80efd87ca8b5b5d9d634b4

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Hip Hop fashion


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is information that is a little bit biased and not formalized. there should not be any original information especially in the Modern subsection. The content is relavent but needs to be expanded upon.


 * Sources
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/23047460?searchText=Hip+hop+fashion&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3FQuery%3DHip%2Bhop%2Bfashion&ab_segments=0%2Fbasic_search_gsv2%2Fcontrol&refreqid=fastly-default%3A59fce0a22e150e3ea2b75007c752fa5f