User:Teddymolineaux/A Different Drummer (novel)/Erthorndyke Peer Review

General info
Teddymolineaux
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Teddymolineaux/A Different Drummer (novel)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):A Different Drummer (novel)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):A Different Drummer (novel)

Content
Content is relevant. Created plot summary, major themes, and critical reception sections.

Tone and Balance
Writing is neutral. None of the claims are heavily biased. Content does not attempt to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
Major Themes section has no sources. Critical reception section also doesn't have any sources. Could look for journal articles on scout.

Organization
Content is well-written and easy-to-read. Some comma issues and longer sentences in plot summary section.

Images and Media
Added info box.

Overall Impressions
Content added improves quality of original article.

Suggestions:


 * Add some sources to major themes section.

Other than that I don't have anything to suggest. Your article's looking really good. Great work!