User:Teddymolineaux/A Different Drummer (novel)/UNique04 Peer Review

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Teddymolineaux
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Lead: This sections looks good. I like the additional information you included, it is concise, yet it gives enough information.

Author Section: I can see why you included this section as it gives the reader better background on the author, but there is already a page dedicated to William Melvin Kelley. Perhaps you could simply link the authors page. I understand that incorporating this section took a great deal of time.

Story Section: Maybe you could change this sections name to plot summary. This information does sound similar to information in the lead.

Plot Summary Section: If you change the story section to plot summary, then you could change this section to chapter summary(s).

Character Summary Section: This sections name could be changed to Characters, rather than Character summary.

Major Themes Section: I like what you have done here.

Overall: I think you have made added some great information! I hate that Dan deleted your work. My final input is that I have seen on well rated pages that they do not capitalize the first letter of the second word. As well as, reread to fix any italicizing and possible grammar mistakes.