User:Teddyp1234/Axolotl/Blueram1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Teddyp1234


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Teddyp1234/Axolotl?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Axolotl

Peer Review By:
Blueram1

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall I really enjoy your addition to the article Axolotl. I agree that adding information about behaviour is important for any animals profile on wikipedia.

Lead
section is very well done in the existing article.

Content
The addition of behavioural information on axolotls is a great addition to the article. I like think all of the added information is informative and encompassing.

Tone and Balance
Excellent job maintaining a neutral tone and keeping the article professional and informative.

Sources and References
All of the sources used are appropriate and the links worked. A few improvements could be made: Source 3 needs the correct date to be added to the citation. The sentence "In nature, an axolotl leads an exceedingly repetitive lifestyle, sticking to the same daily routines." I Couldn't find a source for this.

Organization
I like the way you have this broken down and it will fit into the original article very well. The "behaviour tendencies" section could be broken down into a Social Tendencies and anti-predator tendencies sections to make the section more clear.

Images and media
The original article does a good job of showing images of Axolotls. Wouldn't change anything there.

Overall impressions
I am a very big fan of your article and it reads very much like a wikipedia article. I think it is a great contribution to the article Axolotl. The small changes I mentioned were very nit-picky and overall you've done a solid job.