User:Tedrickja/Catalan language/Simpson Hannah Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username) Tedrickja


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

There was a lot of new information that was added that adds depth to the page. I think that discussing the Spanish Civil War and its impact on language and culture was a good addition to the article. I also think that the sources look credible and that adding citations for every sentence makes your claims stronger.