User:Tedrickja/Catalan language/Zerocarey Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Tedrickja


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Tedrickja/Catalan language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Catalan syntax

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The sources you used are pretty reliable and specific to where you pulled the information. The edit you made to Catalan syntax was concise and it was neat to see you create the edit, get feedback from someone on your talk page, and then take that critique to make your edit even more reliable and accurate. The sentence structure is a bit clunky but I think is it still understandable and your point gets across. I enjoy the comparison between the other Romance languages and Catalan because many people are familiar with those languages so making a reference like that is impactful.