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Article Peer Review: Wandering Jew
The article looks overall okay; There's an unsourced claim in in Literature - 20th Century - Dutch section. The opening sentence is also kind of weak; it doesn't do a good job of establishing the Wandering Jew's apparent widespread influence in European art and literature. It also doesn't surmise the Wandering Jew's typical traits and use. The second paragraph in the opening section also looks like it needs citations. The tone of voice also isn't very neutral or detached; you can tell that the article was primarily written by a single person.

The range of literary sources referenced in the article is very impressive.

Article Evaluation: Kharraqan Towers
Most of the article's content looks alright, however it primarily relies on a single source. There may be a dearth of literature about the subject, and so we should primarily work on finding more sources, if there are any. Most of the claims have citations, except the dimensions given in the second paragraph.

Note on Citation Assignment: I haven't found literally any new information about the Kharraqan towers worth citing in the article; all mentions so far are non existent or very brief and relating them to other topics.

Source Write-ups
“A Survey of Persian Art,” Edited by Arthur Pope.

Tomb Towers are mentioned in:

970-974 - “Gunbad-I-Qabus” by Andre Godard; not really relevant at all. It’s a tomb-tower where Qabus, a petty king in Northern Iran, had his corpse kept in a glass coffin and hung from the dome of the tower by chains. Windows would have let in this first light of the day onto his corpse. Very metal and apparently influential but not relevant.

1020-1026 - “Islamic Architecture f. Seljuq Period.” Tomb Towers. Eric Shroeder. General analysis of tomb towers; may be useful. Gonna scan for later.

1050 - “Islamic Architecture g. Thirteenth Century.” Nothing relevant; mentions tomb towers built after the mongol invasion and pontificates the invasion effect on art.

1083-1084 “Islamic Architecture h. Fourteenth Century.” Arthur Pope. Not too relevant; Gunbad-I-Qabus appears to be the chief influential tomb tower. Kharraqan Towers not at all mentioned.

1163-1164 “Islamic Architecture. K. Timurid” The Tomb Towers of the Mazandaran. Very idiosyncratic series of tomb towers defining a dynasty. Doesn’t appear terribly relevant.

1323-1324 “Architectural Ornament.” Arthur Pope. Gunbad-i-Kabud is mentioned as a tomb-tower decorated with coloured, glazed bricks. That’s all.

1721 “Calligraphy A. An Outline History.” Authored by the editors and more people. The tomb-tower RadKan is mentioned as containing a certain style of calligraphy.

1744 “Calligraphy B. On Pottery.” S. Flury. Mentions a tomb-tower somewhere as an example of old floriated Kufic. Nothing around Kharraqan’s time is mentioned. 1788 “Epigraphy A. Arabic Inscriptions.” Gaston Wiest. Mentions a bevy of tomb towers, as they all have inscriptions. I didn’t see Kharraqan Towers mentioned, but I’m gonna upload a scan of the page to the drive just in case.

Tests.
Test.

Bolder Test.

Italic Test.

Bold and Italic.

What do you think?

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Article Evaluation - for this
It's terrible. It contains long sections copied verbatim, and the entirety of the synopsis praises the poem. Almost every quote is from a new translation of the poem, so it's very probable that it was written by a group of shills. Also, how is there a both a "References," and a "Sources," section?