User:Teenuh1/Zoopharmacognosy/Lexie523 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Teenuh1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Teenuh1/Zoopharmacognosy?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Zoopharmacognosy

Evaluate the drafted changes
I read through your note about the lead sentence. I agree that it is long but it is also descriptive and provides the audience with the direction you will follow throughout the article. If you were to change it, I would recommend you keep as much detail as possible.

I agree that the methods section needs editing. Are you planning on adding more to the section or rewriting it? If you are adding more, what do you plan on adding? Will you add a chemical ecology perspective to this section?

What animals do you plan to add to "Methods of self-medication"? There are many examples provided but there can always be more! Another possible route is to add more information about animals that are already listed. The "mammals" sub-section does have some useful information but the "ants," "dolphins," and "invertebrates" sub-sections leave something to be desired. I noticed you listed all three sections included in "methods of self-medication," do you plan on adding to each section?

I think you have some great ideas! I am excited to see the direction you take when writing your additions to this article.

Note from Tina: Thank you for your review! I think I would rewrite the “mechanisms” section just to make it more coherent, not necessarily adding a chemical ecology perspective. For the “methods” section, I plan on both adding new animals and then putting more detail in the current subsections.