User:Telisep/Limb-sparing techniques/Gallonin Peer Review

The paragraphs are missing references after every sentence. It is important to please include up-to-date references after each sentence for the lead paragraphs. Also the formatting is different from the suggested formatting which I believe makes sense with the information you're presenting but deviated from the norm.

Another issue, is the grammar is not consistent across the article. Please make sure the grammar is consistent. For example, swicthing tenses from active to Passive Please fix. I checked 4-5 hyperlinks at random and they all seem to be in working order and

the references look up-to-date. You also included a lot of great review articles, mainly secondary sources. The references are a strong point. Multiple pictures were also included which is great. You also added a lot of pictures! Great job!!

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