User:Teniad/Tityus (Titian)/Kquinn177 Peer Review

General info
Teniad
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The lead is up to date. The added content is relevant and provides good detail to the very short existing article. The tone is neutral and factual, and the information is accurate. The sources are reliable. The only note I have is maybe change the word 'bodice' in the second to last sentence to 'body' or maybe 'chest'. Bodice typically refers to a part of women's clothing, so this is a little confusing.