User:Teniad/Tityus (Titian)/Mizlake1 Peer Review

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--It might be useful to incorporate the location of where the painting was created in the lead.

--You can discuss more of Titian's life and overall career in the article. You can bring in sources that describe Titian's art style and tie it into this painting. You did it briefly but I think you could find more information. I also think it would be helpful to retitle the section.

--The subtitle "Artwork" isn't an accurate title for the section. You could title it "Inspiration" or "Mythological Origins"

--You can talk about the ownership of the painting throughout the centuries and how the current museum in Spain acquired it.