User:Tenorsalih/Chest voice/Carino, Cz Peer Review

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Tenorsalih
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tenorsalih/Chest_voice?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Chest voice

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I think he's done well with getting pre-published data cited but I am only seeing his contributions in his sandbox but not yet published on the article itself.

I think he should already move those references to the article itself. He might want to double-check the claim about the voice producing harmonics. From what I remember hearing in class- It would be more helpful to say that the voice produces vocal tract resonances (from the production side) while the math of the Fast Fourier in Voce Vista is the one that distinguishes and isolates the harmonics (from the receiving end).

The acoustic buzz entry could also use more citations but he's added some interesting facts there.

" Voce Vista images of a soprano or a countertenor indicate the strongest first four harmonics in full chest singing. "

Finally, was this statement supposed to be related to a photo?

Hello Carina, Cz, thank you very much for your review. The photo is simply related with the EGG machine, it will not be on the article. As you highlighted I entered the citations to the article. As you can see from Howell's Acoustic Roughness paper, or from our lecture notes, thinner voices like sopranos or countertenors produces strong first four to five fundamental frequencies. Here I wanted to keep my contributions to be more accessible to general readers therefore I don't want to go into math. I will consider your suggestion about adding more reference to Acoustic Buzz, especially a citation with multiple examples could be a good sources here.