User:Tenorsax6896/draft of Fang: A Maximum Ride Novel

Characters

 * Max- the main protagonist in the book and who the first person narration is from. she turns 15 in this book and her and fang are  going out but the rest if the group disapproves. she has brown wings with white tips and her special powers  other than her wings are that she can fly very fast, 200 miles an hour. she can also breathe under water and can go very deep under water even under pressures that would kill a regular human being.


 * Fang- ,one of the other older kids in the flock, turns 15 in this book. he almost gets killed in this book and has to get a stab in the hart by a hypodermic needle ,by max, to save his life. he is in love with max and at the end of the book he ends up leaving the flock because he thinks it is “ better” that way.his special powers other that flying are that he can turn invisible if he stands still for a bit, he can also breathe in water and can go under water in pressures that would crush a regular human being.


 *  Angel-, the youngest in the group, turns 7 in this book.she tries to take over as the leader of the flock and makes the rest of the flock go to Hollywood and ends up getting Jeb shoot.she also almost gets fang killed by sort of turning him in to a crazy scienecetist.her special abilities other than her ability to fly is that she can read peoples mind and can persuade them to do something too. she can also talk to fish and other sea animals and that she can breathe under water and can go very deep under water even under pressures that would kill a regular human being.


 * Dylan- the newest character in the book, shows up unexpectedly with the doctor in Africa. He is supposedly a clone of a original dylan that got in a car crash  with one difference, the clone dylan has been genetically tampered with. His genetic mutations are that he has wings, he can see very far distances and even a couple seconds into the future. he also has really good fighting skills even though he has't fought much before.

Plot summery
Meeting Doctor God In this section the flock is in Africa and while they are there they meet Dr. Gunther-Hagen and his companion Dylan who has  wings and is geneticly made to be Max’s "perfect other half". The "crazy" doctor tries to recruit them and give them even more special powers than they already have like super healing powers that lets for example a chopped off finger grow back in no time. Any way the flock denies the doctors offer and max denies Dylan big time.

 Home Is Where The Hart Breaks In this section max and the flock go back home to their new house around where their first house was. Here max makes the flock study like they are acutely in school and the flock all have a birthday on the same day except for angel who had hers earlier. When Gazzy sets the the bitrthday fireworks off the flock sees Jeb driving up the dirt road to their house with Dylan. after that Max and Fang go out on a flight and land somewhere and while they are gone the rest of the flock is attacked by a pack of erasers and are barely able to fend them off. When Max and Fang get back and find the flock exhausted from the fight and angel kicks max out of the flock because she is more interested with her being with fang than being there to protect the flock and Angel sugests to become the new flock leader and later that comes true.

What Happens In Hollywood Stays In Hollywood In this section Angel leads the flock to Hollywood to become stars. Quickly afterwords Max comes to Holly wood to find the flock in a mes and gets a gun held to her head by none other than angel and in the process some other person who was trying to kid-nap max ends up shooting Jeb. Jeb of course does not die. Angel also runs away to doctor Gunther-Hagen who is staying in one of his houses near by. Max runs off to get her and finds out that Angel does not want to go back. When Max comes back she finds that Fang has run away too. Fang also goes to the crazy doctor and gets killed. Angel sends a mind message to Max. Max of course comes immediately and so does the rest of the flock. When the flock arrives they trash the place and max stabs a big hypodermic needle filled to the brim with adrenalin, into Fang’s hart and ends up bringing him back over to the living. After that the flock goes to their dog, Total’s, wedding(with another non-talking dog for a bride, a malamute named Akila,). When Max arrives back at the safe house she finds a note from fang that says that he is sorry but that he needs to leave ,because like what angel said, when he and max are together they are distracted from their duty.

Reception
The reviewer for Booklist Publication said that this book will excite the readers of the Maximum Ride series.