User:Terence9915/Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic/NCawit Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Terence9915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental health during the COVID-19 pandemic

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The introduction paragraph demonstrates a good start to an article, but in my opinion should contain more information that was from the peak of the pandemic to right now. More recent information could be useful.

Content
The content contains information from the start of the pandemic in 2020, but should include more information from last year to now.

Tone and Balance
The content is well balanced as it is generally statistics of mental health. The content on the article seems neutral without any evidence of trying to persuade the reader.

Sources and References
The article contains reliable sources from credible organizations such as 'WHO' and 'CDC' and accurately explains what the sources are providing.

Organization
The article seems well-written and organized, depending on what you feel is a well organized article. From what I have read, there are no grammatical or spelling errors.

Images and Media
The images on the article include statistics and graphs of mental health and workers during the pandemic. The media used on the article seems relevant to the topic.