User:Terence9915/Psychological effects of Internet use/JackGradyP1 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Terence9915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological effects of Internet use
 * Psychological effects of Internet use
 * Psychological effects of Internet use

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, the article about how Internet use affects people psychologically is solid. There is a lot of complex information but it's simplified and well-explained. The opening paragraph summarises the rest of the article briefly but enough for the reader. There is a lot of information but it is broken down enough to understand it easily. My favourite aspect of the article was the links made from one section to the next. It was fairly precise in the beginning but it became simpler as the article went along, a good way to do it. The only criticism I have are some of the citations. Two of them need expansion. There are one or two more and they seem to go against Wikipedia's citing and source quoting rules. But overall it was an interesting and enjoyable article.