User:Terence9915/Psychological effects of Internet use/NCawit Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Terence9915


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
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 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Psychological effects of Internet use

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead sentences mention "some research" and "some studies", which I believe should have citations to the actual research and studies.

Content
The content contains about the effects of Internet use, but only shows information from sources. I think the article should contain experiences from those who have actually been exposed to the psychological effects of the internet

Tone and Balance
The article seems well balanced and backed up by credible sources.

Sources and References
It shows that a lot of references and sources are used in the article, which is good because most of the information is backed up by a credible source.

Organization
The article seems well-written and organized, and does not contain spelling or grammar errors.

Images and Media
The article only contains one image, which is a graph. More images should be added to show the effects in better detail.