User:Teresa Michella Da Silva/Leadership Style/Batuolana Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Teresa Michella Da Silva


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Teresa Michella Da Silva/Leadership Style - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Leadership style - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the article drafted, there was a good number of new information added. The lead included a lot of introductory ideas that I belief reflect the content and theme of the whole article. The lead was kept short and concise which is the best way to have a lead published - the way to make it possibly better is to make it even shorter. The body content drafted into the article was really good. It gives to-the-point information about the knowledge of leadership style. It covers different contents within the subject which shows a good tone and balance. A source of addition for the body would be to include informative contents in addition to the conclusive statements written and cited. There was no addition of image files which is understandable to the nature of the article and overall, this draft has brought great improvement to the initial article.