User:Teresa Michella Da Silva/Leadership Style/Jalyssabeamer Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
In your intro, body, and references page I noticed yours was structured differently than mine and the other one I had peer review. It was set up like bullet points were supposed to be there and not like a paragraph. On the other hand, you had made a lot of great points.