User:Terrapin2022/Killing of Johnny Robinson/Dustyrose.bloss0m Peer Review

General info
Terrapin2022
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Terrapin2022/Killing of Johnny Robinson
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Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked the changes you made in your draft like adding information which was very helpful for me to read. Overall, the article in the sandbox seems to be well-organized.