User:Terrapinoz/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Supercritical_fluid_extraction

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I worked with SFE instruments during my time doing research. It is an important subject because SFE can allow for efficient extraction with multiple solvents and highly specific parameters. My preliminary understanding is a vague overview of how the instrumentation on campus works, and less about the mechanics of the extraction.

Evaluate the article
The lead offers a concise overview of the topic. The article deals with SFE and does not have much information on supercritical fluid itself, this was mentioned in the talk page, a user wanted to leave the supercritical fluid information to the respected page. The articles' content itself is brief, and there is no mention of history and very little information about different styles of instrumentation. There is a very small amount of references, and are mostly from the early 2000s, so new information would be helpful to improve the article. The article is well organized with a good amount of related images, and uses an objective and neutral tone to covey information to the reader. The talk page is very brief, only two corrections are mentioned. Overall the article is a good start for someone thinking about supercritical fluid extraction, however it could use more recent information and history of SFE evolution.Terrapinoz (talk) 15:54, 25 January 2022 (UTC)

GLH comments
A few things caught my eye about the article, and particularly a visit to the edit history - there are a LOT of reversions of edits to the page! I am not sure if the section titled "simple model of SFE" really belongs on the page, and I am curious as to whether a lot of it is plagiarized from reference 6. Also seems weird to me that there is a random link to Laboratory equipment.

A deeper look - and it seems one person has used multiple accounts to edit the page and earned themselves a ban: see User:Edgar181