User:Terrapinoz/Monobenzyl phthalate/Lanerino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Terrapinoz


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Terrapinoz/Monobenzyl phthalate
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Monobenzyl Phalate

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead
 * The lead is concise and well written.
 * Content
 * Make sure the information in the table on the right side of the article is correct and up to date.
 * All the content belongs in the article, though more content needs to be added.
 * Tone
 * The article is in neutral tone with no obvious bias.
 * Sources
 * The sources that have links work and they are good, reliable sources that are up to date.
 * To add to the coverage of the current sources, I suggest seeing if there is more important information from the sources already provided. It seems they need more than one source per sentence, so see if you can get more from those sources.
 * Organization
 * The content is concise.
 * Add sections to the article as you get more information. Look at other organic compounds on wikipedia to see what section titles they have.
 * I suggest sections like 'Uses' or 'Safety'.