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Article Evaluation
Angela Davis is a well known black feminist activist as well as a political activist. In the article that described her political position of being both communist and socialist. This fact about her political position didn't distract but rather peak interest into more about her writings along with her involvement of such political parties in the United States (democracy). The article is neutral in the sense that it doesn't provide a point of view of her political stance as a bad nor good thing, it simply provides facts of her position. Majority of the links do not provide the reader with sources of bias or non bias evaluation. But rather background information on the subjects that Davis has positions on both as a feminist and a socialist. Therefore the neutral nature of these links provide a reliable respect on the subjects. The article is well updated, to her most recent activism in Women's March on Washington where she sat as co-chair. The article does an exceptional job of providing a well rounded illustration of Davis' political stance and how it paralleled her activism with black feminism throughout her entire career.

Possible Topics
Black Feminist Future: Black Feminist Future

Articles: 1.5.2, 5.0

Alicia Garza: Alicia Garza

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I plan to improve this article by elaborating how black feminist are essential to the modern conversation along with the black lives matter movement. "The Third movement" Also how celebrities have a role. Also dive into what role Alicia Garza has for not just the Black Lives Matter movement but for black women.

Peer Response - Jillin Colunga
It seems that this article will be improved by what you plan to do. One thing to do to make this article stronger might be to include headings on some of the women that hold influence on Black women. Also make a heading for Black lives matter and for modern time women who hold a powerful role. Also under upcoming events you might want to change it to just events and talk about some of the events they have done in the past and how they are important, and what they accomplish. Adding more information on the history might also be helpful. Creating a separate heading to explain the events that occurred during the Ferguson, Missouri police shooting will also be helpful that way the readers know how and why the group formed.

Peer Response: Chantal Robles
This is a great article to further expand on and elaborate. Given that this group is a black feminist organization responding to police brutality, it would greatly benefit from a heading on "Say Her Name" that would highlight the importance of police brutality against black women that so often goes unnoticed. More background information would also benefit this article, since it states that the formation of this group (Black Feminist Future) is a direct response to the police shootings in Ferguson but offers no description of the event. Statistics showing the number of black women that are targeted by police violence (sexual, emotional, or physical) would greatly improve the content of this article. Maybe Assata Shakur's reading on women in prison would be helpful, or Danielle McGuire's book "At the Dark End of the Street" has a lot of information regarding black women's continued historical fight against sexualized violence, including sexualized violence at the hands of police officers.