User:Texasbird/Ioway Tribal National Park/Emmamlewis Peer Review


 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Texasbird


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Texasbird/Ioway_Tribal_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ioway Tribal National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead has not been updated as far as I can see as the author only has a snippet of the article in the sandbox to edit. The content that has been included so far is very relevant and well portrayed. It appears all content is up to date and there is nothing that is missing. This article definitely deals with an underrepresented population and I think it is a fantastic addition to the page. The content added was neutral and factual and I saw no signs of biased language. The author included two sources both of which were reliable and had accurate information. Both links were working. As far as I saw there were no major grammatical errors and the content was well written. There has been no photos added to the new section of the article, but I do think it would be a great addition. Overall, everything done so far looks great and I think this content is an excellent addition.