User:Texasbird/Ioway Tribal National Park/Mnelson25 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Texasbird


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Texasbird/Ioway_Tribal_National_Park?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ioway Tribal National Park

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * no spelling and grammar errors that I saw
 * there is no lead
 * content is neutral and is adding to the overall article quality
 * content is concise and clear
 * the sources are credible and the links work
 * there are no intext citations
 * adding images would be nice to show what the park looks like
 * overall this is a very meaningful contribution to this page because the history is important