User:Textavour/Colorism in the Caribbean/Afitz7 Peer Review

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Textavour


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 * Colorism in the Caribbean
 * Colorism in the Caribbean

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The first thing I noticed about the current version of the article is the big warning at the top that identifies the tone of the article as argumentative, with a clear personal bias. As we know the importance of objectivity on Wikipedia, this could be a great thing to focus on!

The article's lead looks good to me, I appreciate the links to other wiki articles.

The "Colorism across the Caribbean" section could have some additional countries added, according to information available to you.

I have noticed a few minor errors in grammar, nothing major or worth noting specifically but it could be helpful to just go through the page and fix the little things that stand out to you.

The article has many great sources already and everything seems to be appropriately cited. I think it's a really interesting topic and I'm sure you can make some great edits!