User:Textavour/Dorothy Roberts/123Hannahc123 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dorothy Roberts
 * Dorothy Roberts

Evaluate the drafted changes
-All of the links work

-I think the lead is great but there should be a citation at the end of it

-The first sentence in the background is confusing to read. Grammatically, it seems off

-The way the article is broken up is great

-The article takes a neutral stand point