User:Tfitz98/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Egg predation

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
It is abstract to think about eating the reproductive products of another animal, yet when we consume a fried egg nothing seems out of the ordinary. This is interesting because going into depth about something makes it seem more and more abstract, but on the surface level it seems ordinary. I think the article does a good job of explaining the exact definition in the first sentence.

Evaluate the article
The introductory sentence describes and defines the article topic. The introduction briefly describes some of the relationships of some specific animals, but does not go into much depth about the subtopics in the article. It contains a little information not explained in the rest of the article. For example, it mentions specific organisms that consume eggs but does not mention these anymore in the article. The lead contains a little too much detail, such as very specific examples of egg predation, where more are explained in the rest of the article. There is no content that does not belong, and it does not deal with any equity gaps. The main content is up to date and relevant to the topic. The article is describing egg predation, so there are no view points that are mentioned that could be interpreted as having any sort of opinion included in them. All of the sources are peer reviewed and from a primary source. The article is well written and makes grammatical sense. However, there does appear to be a slight issue with organization as the lead is a little too specific, and the main content does not contain much information. There is only one part of the main content, and that is titled "Ecological Relationship." More information could be added to this, such as the history of the concept, who created it, as well as how it could be applied to other ecological concepts. There are two images, and both seem appropriate as they show two of the mentioned organisms consuming eggs. As this is a relatively unimportant article, the talk page is empty and does not contain any discussion whatsoever. Overall, the article was informative at a basic level. There could be more information included but for someone wanting to understand what egg predation is, the article is developed enough.