User:Tge3hn/Evaluate an Article

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Talk:Cori Bush

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I chose this article due to my prior knowledge of Cori Bush, I felt I would be able to research topics from the page if necessary. This page matters because she is a United States politician who inspires many people and has shaped the history of United States politics since she was sworn in to office. My preliminary impression of the article was that it was lacking. It does not discuss enough about her nor does it discuss the impact she has had in politics.

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The Lead sections are good heading for the article, however they fail to provide details that explain the headings. For instance neither " Early Life and Education" nor "Personal Life" mention the life circumstances that led her to politics. The content is not up to date as it does not mention her response to the overturning of Roe v Wade nor does it mention the last few years in any detail of what she has done. I believe the sources are good they, they have not been updated is the issue. The organization could be much better. The ideal would be an overview section followed by a chronological section of her politics and activism. There is 2 images in the page and more would be beneficial. From what I can tell the talk page for this article is minimal. My overall impression of this article is that it has not been researched or fleshed out to provide helpful, accurate information of Cori Bush. To be improved it need more organization to the lead sections followed by detailed information of her political activities.