User:ThaiMilkTea/Central Valley (California)/Erazo2021 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Nmart28


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:ThaiMilkTea/Central_Valley_(California)&oldid=1054587873


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Central Valley (California)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This draft seems to be going well as the paragraph has a lot of content that relates the article and focuses on the specific topic of droughts in the Central Valley. However, since it is in the early stages of drafting there are still things that are missing. This includes citations in the paragraph in order to avoid plagiarism, and more references needed to show how important this topic is.